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A Virgin to Depression by =gothic-anomie:icongothic-anomie:

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To live a life of colour
To take away the blades, blood and tears
To never have heard
My own bitter screams in the night

To live a life without
Hatred for myself, my friends and family
To never have killed
My relationships with them

To live a life of love
To love and have been loved
To never have become
What I am

To live a life like yours
A virgin to depression
To never have tasted
The tears of my life

Would be bliss
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Yet another poem about depression. You all must be thinking that i'm some depressed suicidal, carving words of hated into my already scarred flesh...
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~Melody-Hikari:iconMelody-Hikari: Mar 24, 2006, 10:40:22 PM
wow... it's odd, my mind didn't understand it much, but my soul did.
awesome, another fav.

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=gothic-anomie:icongothic-anomie: Mar 24, 2006, 10:43:56 PM
what didnt you understand?
and another one? you rock!

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~Melody-Hikari:iconMelody-Hikari: Mar 24, 2006, 11:20:37 PM
no, it's jsut that my head couldn't keep up with it, yet my heart and soul every word. My mind took the last line to understand.

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~HysteriaBound:iconHysteriaBound: Mar 25, 2006, 2:09:19 AM
I like all of this. Not as much as the other ones, but still quite a lot. The last line in the 2nd stanza doesnt seem to fit to me tho. The seperation of the last line works well to create emotion though which is cool. :)

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~rebel-katx:iconrebel-katx: Mar 25, 2006, 6:36:37 AM
I love this one. My favs of your's so far. I relate *nods*

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~WatfordDoll:iconWatfordDoll: Mar 25, 2006, 8:13:08 AM
i can relate actually...very much so.
:+fav:

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=gothic-anomie:icongothic-anomie: Mar 25, 2006, 4:48:39 PM
i won't change that line because it states that the narrarator has 'killed' her relationship, not only with her friends and family, but with herself too, which i think fits nicely into the poem. But thanks for checking it out and commenting, realy apreciated :)

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=gothic-anomie:icongothic-anomie: Mar 25, 2006, 4:49:28 PM
hey thanks for the +fav!

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=gothic-anomie:icongothic-anomie: Mar 25, 2006, 4:51:11 PM
thanks for commenting and faving!

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